Minotaur’s Birth,
or, The Labor of Pasiphae
BY DR. AGONSON
A monster grows inside my tender womb;
his horns, not dull, already sprout and pierce.
No fleshy toes are his, but like my groom
—a union by Poseidon made, his fierce,
unstable wrath stoked by my true husband’s
hubristic greed to not return, but love
too much, the earth-shaker’s given omen—
hard hooves for feet possess. He kicks! What of
my passions born by god’s vile judgement,
where has desire flown? O Daedale,
your craft, why can’t it be quite innocent?
What good comes from your intellect this day?
The pangs of birth have like a wave rocked me,
sweeping the unwary far out to sea.
Each time i read this i see more ☺
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That’s high praise. Thank you.
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You’re very welcome sir!
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The fresh perspective on the Minotaur… I guess a mother always love her offspring… even if he has horns and cause her pain.
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Thank you. I wrote it after retelling the myth of the Minotaur and Theseus to my young cousin. I had to edit out the overly sexual parts of the story, and started thinking about Pasiphae.
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To write it from her perspective reminds me a bit of “the world’s wife” by Carol Ann Duffy…
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Great enjambment – it flows really well and reads like part of the classical canon. It’s great to read it from Pasiphae’s perspective. Those Greek women were so often silent.
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Thank you.
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I keep coming back to the last two lines. You’ve crafted the voice in this so well throughout but it really echoes at the end.
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Thank you. The end is about the most important part to a sonnet.
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Ah… my Greek heart is very happy to read that mythological sonnet 🙂 intelligent use of words, an almost theatrical touch… echoes of dramatic monologues… Very nicely done 🙂
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Thank you.
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I love mythology, especially the story of the Minotaur, and you’ve retold it so well in your sonnet, Sheldon. You’ve made great use of enjambment and a strong final couplet – and I agree with Bjorn – it reminds me of Duffy;s ‘The World’s Wife’.
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I love mythology as well. It is a lot of fun to learn and retell myths.
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telling an ancient tale from a fresh perspective is appreciated and you’ve done it with great skill (more than i have knowledge to articulate)
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That is most kind of you.
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Nice line: “The pangs of birth have like a wave rocked me,”
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Thank you.
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A classic tale told from fresh perspective…alive & kicking!
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Thank you for reading.
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Ah! It is all about point of view! This is clever and unique – the voice and word choices are so well done.
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Thank you.
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Powerful! In the spirit of RoseMary’s Baby…
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Thank you.
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“Passion born of god’s Vile judgement,”
Greek myths always cause me to reflect on the use of power without the presence of empathy. Two innocents, mother and Minotaur, are used as weapons, and by nature are forced into complicity in the world , the last two lines are a powerful and painful delivery, and just like always; more children are going to be killed. What a world.
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